Have you ever seen the mountains?
Terrifying, Rough
Towering, Jagged
Tall, Edges.
Have you ever felt the ocean?
Hard waves crushing your body, cool water chilling your being
Have you ever smelled the forest?
Evergreens, swaying trees, wild flowers dancing
Have you ever heard an earthquake?
Rumbling, grumbling, crashing, smashing
Have you ever tasted a tsunami?
Salt water, sloshing, gigantic winds, huge waves
And finally peace.
Good job, Courtney! I like your line spacing and lengths for this poem!
ReplyDeleteCourtney,I really like how you rhymed a lot of your lines. I also like how your words go up and down to look like a mountain.
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem! you did a really good job!
ReplyDeleteGood poem
ReplyDeleteGood poem. I like how you made your words look like a mountain. By the way, I have never tasted a tsunami .
ReplyDeleteCourt! I love this poem its amazing and I love your line spacing and words!
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